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napowrimo day seven here,
invisible arcs of the sun
create brilliant blue auroras
softly dancing on this polar platform
although a few
softer greens
move quietly and deliberately
for hours on end.

beneath,
the red echo of sprites and elves
leaps up in finger-shaped branches
for a fifty-mile long
hand shake.

past,
blue jets of cloudtops
and the invisible tension
of a million raindrops
nervous over gained weight.

under,
an onslaught
of falling bodies
unites with ceilings, concrete
dirt, rivers, upward palms

a telegram operator
with no batteries
asks
"How do you see my writing?"
napowrimo day six good dream
home-brewed flavor
poured generously as
the comforting aqua vitae
of minds
NaPoWriMo Day 5 once more, into another world!
wring your senses now
in anticipation of a leap
the senses on your neck          tingling, ears
hearing the slightest
call of
altruistic melodies
ringing faintly through this
earth

juxtaposed to this
unruly mind.
make your hands strive
perfection
in an ancient
twist

oh sweet music
a requiem of times long passed
vivid in these eyes of yours
intrinsic to these ears of yours

cobbled with the sure way
to supreme knowledge
overarching wisdom you
relish these bits
in an
all-exclusive fashion
never relenting this
fabricated
animation

now
tensed and ready
all that's left is to
spring
your
napowrimo day four...five swank
cruising through caelum
on her ladyship anatida
her sails poised to catch
a stellar wind

we are going places!
there is so much to see
sweet nebulas
and beautiful aliens
and i am all caught up
in this
desertion.
napowrimo day four...four gaudy
garish
graces

i would rather
be clumsy.
napowrimo day four...three colourful lights
these are explosions
a million miles away
eta carinae, betelgeuse,
sirius, you were all bound
to go sometime
but look
from their skeletons
a thousand little children are crawling out.

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:iconmereshacrewer:
This is called a cleave poem.

As for the category--it is supposed to be Literature > Poetry > Nature > Traditional / Fixed Form . They don't allow jpeg files which is why i can never submit my normal stuff to dA !

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